Reference: Moje, E.B. (2008). ‘Foregrounding the disciplines in secondary literacy teaching and learning: A call for change.’ Journal of Adolescent and Adult Literacy, 52(2), 96-107. Retrieved from Academic Search Complete database (EBSCOhost).
10 page article in which Moje pursues the question of disciplinary literacies versus generic literacies. Moje talks about possible reasons why school reforms based on improving generic literacies within disciplines seemed to have failed. She argues that teachers may need to focus more on discipline specific literacy, and that a deep understanding of this is required for building cross disciplinary knowledge and relevance, which is also important. She notes that this is a challenge, considering the way school is structured into isolated 50 minute classes, which lends itself to the “pedagogy of telling”.
The Language of Balance and The Language of Absolutes
by Rob Westerlund & Ruslana Westerlund
When it comes to politics and the mass media, it’s the rabid dog that barks the loudest. News agencies make their profits by having a large audience watch their newscast and commercials. Every journalist worth their salt knows that to get a large audience, you have to provide entertaining and titillating news. Therefore, news stories and speakers are selected according to how loud, extreme, and polarizing they are. Some news networks’ bread and butter is presenting a polarized political point of view. However, to have a well-balanced understanding of politics and culture, it is more helpful to have speakers who are balanced and moderated in their approach to understanding and relating these important issues.
An understanding of Systemic Functional Linguistics can assist the listener in interpreting the message of an absolutist and possibly polarizing speaker versus a more moderate and balanced person. One of the benefits of being able to identify the difference between an absolutist and a moderated speaker is that a moderate speaker is less likely to use fallacious arguments, like appealing to emotion and fear, and more likely to present facts, precedent, and balanced personal views. But how do you identify the difference between an absolutist and a moderate by using a linguistic analysis of their discourse?
Systemic Functional Linguistics defines language as a meaning making resource. It views languages users as choice makers who use language to achieve their desired purposes. Let’s consider choices made by both absolutists and moderates in their discourse as presented in the table below.
Table 1.Examples of Language of Balance and Language of Absolutes
The Language of Balance
“opening up spaces to other voices”
The Language of Absolutes
“closing spaces to other voices”
One would think
It could be
This might be true …
This is true!
On average, most people seem to…
In most cases, generally
All the time
On more than one occasion
It looks like, there will be a
It is undeniable
Some people find
In an ideal world
This must happen
There is no excuse
I don’t know if I believe…
It’s definitely not
I feel as if
They must do this
Be careful to
According to experts
I know for a fact
I think …
The fact is
No doubt about it…
The contrasting language used by moderate and absolutist speakers or writers illustrated in the table above, helps one to measure the approach an individual is using in relating political, cultural, and personal information. For example,
Moderate Speaker: I feel the absolutist may be more likely to harbor a strong, unconscious bias towards the subject matter they are presenting.
Absolutist Speaker: It’s obvious that the moderate speaker beats around the bush and must be blind to the truth everyone else sees.
What is demonstrated in the sentences above is the strategic care and precision of the moderate speaker in their language choices, in contrast with the curt and terse language choices made by the absolutist.
According to SFL, we represent ideas and cast interpersonal values every time we speak. Ideational and interpersonal are interwoven in every utterance. It is the degree or spectrum of “factuality” that differs between moderates and absolutists.
“Under systemic functional perspectives, … there is no utterance which is without interpersonal value. Nevertheless, the influence of the common-sense notion of the ‘fact’ is widespread and it may be tempting to see some utterances as more interpersonal than others. Under the heteroglossic orientation, however, we are reminded that even the most ‘factual’ utterances … are nevertheless interpersonally charged in that they enter into relationships of tension with a related set of alternative and contradictory utterances. The degree of that tension is socially determined.”
Using the Martin and White Appraisal framework, you can describe the balanced and absolutist language as “opening” or “closing” spaces. When a moderate uses language such as “it seems”, “apparently”, “I think”, or “probably”, it does not mean that they are evading the truth. It simply means that they are opening up spaces for interaction with other possibilities and other voices, using Bakhtin’s term, they are creating possibiilties for “heteroglossic dialog.” On the other hand, when speakers use language resources of high modality such as “have to”, “must” and over-generalizations like “never”, “always”, “everyone/no one”, they entertain an idea for a short time but quickly dismiss it, rejecting any possibility of a dialog.
Reflect on your language choices: do they open or close spaces for further dialog?
Rob Westerlund: Born in Pittsburgh and raised in Iowa, Robert Paul Westerlund is a writer, actor, preacher, college instructor, and public speaker. Rob is a college instructor who has taught many colleges courses, including Ethics, Critical Thinking, Logic, Humanities, and Film in Society. He has also worked as a minister of worship and pastor in Minnesota and Wisconsin, and a missionary in Japan, Ukraine, and Spain. His previous books include Hollywood Theological Seminary, City of Angels, and The Baka Geta Story. His most recent book is First Person Omniscient, a philosophical thriller, with a light touch of humor and a serious examination of the world we live in and the reality surrounding us we are all missing, all written in a rarely used perspective: First Person Omniscient.
Ruslana Westerlund: Born in Buzhanka, Ukraine, Ruslana is a linguist, teacher, and thinker, and writer. She is married to Rob Westerlund whose balanced language and perspective on very polarized issues has inspired her to describe his language in this blog.
This blog serves as a repository of my favorite quotes and a few notes on Halliday, M. A. K. (1989). Spoken and written language. Oxford University Press and Language and Education, Volume 9 in the Collected Works of M.A.K. Halliday, (2007).
Both Vygotsky and Halliday came to the same conclusions about the role of language in learning even though they did their thinking in different disciplines: one in psychology and the other one in linguistics. In the example below, they converged on the role of the oral language as a tool for learning, not a final product, but a vehicle for learning.
Halliday (1989) said “Traditionally the first task of the school has been to ensure that children can read and write. Once a child is literate, it is assumed that he or she can use written language as a tool for learning, in the same way that he or she has always learnt through spoken language. In fact, until recently it would never have been expressed like that; the spoken language was given little or no recognition in educational thinking, and was certainly not thought of as a vehicle for learning. Even today, though speech has been given a place in the classroom, it is seen more as a skill desirable in itself (the need to be articulate, or ‘orate’, to get on life) than as essential equipment for learning other things” (Halliday, (1989). p. 97). Vygotsky also stressed the importance of social interactions as a tool which mediates learning. He claimed that cognitive development and stems from social interactions. Likewise, language for Vygotsky was a social concept that developed from interactions.
Here are some of my favorite quotes on the importance of spoken language and differences between spoken and written language.
“Most of what we learn, we learn through language. This is true even of our commonsense knowledge, all that we learn before, and outside of, our schooling: but it is especially true of educational knowledge. Language is so central to the whole of the educational process that its role was never even talked about, since no one could conceive of education without it.”
At the same in their practice teachers have always shown recognition of the learning potential of the spoken language, because they have expected their pupils to listen to them. Furthermore, they have assigned a certain place to speech in their classroom activities. In part, this has been determined by the pattern of speech roles that the spoken language sets up: it is quicker and more effective to check whether a student knows the answer by asking a question orally in class than by setting a written test every time. But there is more to it than that. Anyone who teaches has a sense of what is communicated by speaking and what is communicated by writing; and the two are not identical. If we start with the general notion of learning through language, then some learning takes place more effectively through the spoken language and some through the written.
Of course, there are individual differences in learning style – some learn more through the ear, others through the eye. And there are differences in teaching style; a teacher may be more at home in one or the other medium.
“But above and beyond these differences are the different world views that are embodied in speech and writing. Put from the learner’s point of view: reading/writing and listening/speaking are different ways of learning because they are different ways of knowing.” Halliday (1989, p. 97)
The written language presents a SYNOPTIC view. It defines its universe as product rather than a process. Whether we are talking about a triangle, the layout of a house, or the organization of a society, the written language encodes it as a structure or, alternatively, as a chaos – but either way, as a thing that exits. In principle, we can freeze it, attend to it, and take it in as a whole. The cost of this perspective may be some simplifying of the relationship among its parts, and a lesser interest in how it got the way it is, or in where it is going next (p. 97).
The spoken language presents a DYNAMIC view. It defines its universe primarily as process, encoding it not as a structure but as constructing – or demolishing. In the spoken language, phenomena do not exist, they happen. They are seen as coming into being, changing, moving in and out of focus, and as interacting in a continuous onward flow. The cost of this perspective is that we may have less awareness of how things actually are, at a real or imaginary point in time’ and a lessened sense of how they stay that way (p. 98).
“In the literate culture, we tend not to take the spoken language seriously. This is not surprising, since not only has writing taken over many of the high prestige functions of language in our society, but also our highly valued texts are now all written ones. Written records have replaced oral memories as the repositories of collective wisdom and of verbal art.”
“[Traditional] Linguistics has played a significant part in sanctifying the written language. It is only after language is written down that it becomes an object accessible to conscious attention and systematic study; so grammar begins with writing, and it codifies the written language. The so-called ‘traditional grammar’ that came into the ‘grammar schools’ was a theory of written language.”
That’s why Halliday spent a considerable amount of his theory development by describing the grammar of the spoken language and giving it prominence in linguistics.
“Since in writing we only preserve the final draft, such a grammar gives an idealized picture of what language is like. Furthermore, it tends to be used in a normative way, as an ideal that everyone should strive to attain. And as there are always plenty of people around who cannot attain [or are not interested in attaining] that ideal – children, dialect speakers, foreigners, the illiterate – it provides a useful means for evaluation, of separating the verbally sophisticated sheep from the ungrammatical goats” (p. 97-98).
The quote above is not meant to say that we should be judging people, but that’s what happens: people use the written form of language to judge others who have no use for developing the written mode when all of their life revolves around using the spoken mode which is governed by different rules.
“Learning is essentially a process of construing meanings; and the cognitive component in learning is a process for constructing linguistic meanings – semantic systems and semantic structures. These systems of meaning, the ideational and interpersonal realities that we create in and through language, embody, … two complementary perspectives: the synoptic and the dynamic. When we learn anything, we construe it simultaneously as a universe of things and as a universe of processes – doing and happening. We can think of this most easily in relation to a piece of machinery: in order to understand a machine, we need a synoptic view of its construction as an organic whole, out of parts and parts of parts, and we need a dynamic view of what it performs and how it works” p. 98.
“There has been a considerable amount of research into the role and functions of spoken language in non-literate cultures. But because of the great prestige of writing, there has been very little notice taken of the role of speech in literate cultures. And yet we do not stop talking, when we are able to read and write; and – what is important here – we do not stop learning through talk. … We have to take seriously the contention that people learn by using language. … But while the written language is good for organizing dense and complex structures, which we can work on in our own time and with fully conscious minds, spoken language is good for following intricate chains of argument that move along at a rapid pace and may even remain slightly below the level of our conscious attention” (Halliday, Language and Education, p. 302).
And my favorite quote of how Halliday describes spoken and written language:
“So, while speech and writing can both be very complex, the complexities tend to be of different kinds. The complexity of speech is choreographic – an intricacy of movement. That of writing is crystalline – a denseness of matter. In linguistic terms, spoken language is characterized by complex sentence structures with low lexical density (more clauses, but fewer high content words per clause); written language by simple sentence structures with high lexical density (more high content words per clause, but fewer clauses). We could express this even more briefly, though at the cost of distorting it somewhat, by saying that speech has complex sentences with simple words, while writing has complex words in simple sentences. The difference, it should be said very clearly, is one of degree; I am far from wishing to suggest that spoken and written language are separate, discrete phenomena. They are both manifestations of the same underlying system. We all know speakers, and writers, who manage to achieve both kinds of complexity at once!
What I have been illustrating are general tendencies; and I have chosen examples which display rather clearly the differences I have been discussing. Most texts lie some way in between.” Halliday, Language and Education, Vol. 9, p.77.
Becoming aware of the technicalities of our language and how it works in the PETAA Grammar and Teaching course with Jo Rossbridgehas been an absolute eye opener for me. In all these years there is so much that I have just taken for granted about how our language hangs together. I haven’t analysed the patterns, the reasons, the language choices or the craft. Are you the same?
Today, I was teaching a Stage 1 class and we were writing about our findings from a series of S.T.E.A.M. lessons that we have been working on. Never before have I been so conscious and analytical of their choices of pronouns, conjunctions, connectives and the impact of these factors upon their writing. Being better informed helped me to conference intelligently with these students and to have constructive discussions about what was and was not working for their audience.
Module 5 concludes our course Teaching students from a refugee background (c) State of NSW (Dept 0f Education) 2016. Looking at the module outline I have been pondering why it bears the simple title, Teaching Writing – but more of that later.
To be able to write well is definitely ‘hard work’. Stephen King says that, the scariest moment is always just before you start. John O’Harais of the opinion that becoming a reader is the essence of becoming a writer and Doris Lessing insists that you only learn to be a better writer by actually writing. Our goal as teachers of English Language (EL) learners is to scaffold our lessons through activities that involve substantive conversations and immersion in rich texts so that our students are not afraid to put pen to paper.
How can we as teachers help our students to progress from being able to write and copy…
The purpose of this post is to share theoretical thoughts on language development from sociocultural perspective (contrastive to psycholinguistic view), namely, Systemic Functional Linguistics. This blog, hence, will serve as a vessel for capturing syntheses from my own readings of SFL scholars. As an explicit disclaimer, this blog will not address teaching strategies for language development, except for a couple of implications for teachers as a conclusion. If interested on strategies for teaching writing from SFL perspective, you are welcome to visit this blog here and here and critical reading of social studies is here.
SFL is concerned not with how language users follow rules, but how people construe meanings, enact interpersonal relationships, and create discourse itself of various kinds. This approach to language views language development not as a linear process, but as an extension of multilingual learners’ functional range in a diversity of contexts that expand through the years of schooling(Christie & Derewianka, 2008). This theory of language places primary emphasis not on the language users’ knowledge of rules but on the speakers’ meaning making potential, i.e., what a language user can mean, rather than how much language they can produce due to neurologically-based constraints. In this view, language development is not concerned with an increase of sentence length, but with the development of individual students’ multilingual meaning making potential as part of collective. When children learn other languages, then their language development is the development of their multilingual voice, an increased complexity of identity and stance, and their positioning and ability to take on a variety of roles in a growing range of contexts (Byrnes, 2013). The question becomes not how much language students have but what they can do with it and how meaningfully students can participate in various learning contexts.
This view of language challenges the deficit view which is commonly held of language learners and their linguistic repertoires. Instead, it is related to the range of authentic learning opportunities students are provided to participate in and how well they are supported to do so. It does not treat school discourses as more valuable than students’ linguistic repertoires but views language development as a diversification of opportunities for participation in a variety of contexts, in and outside of school. Table 1 captures basic tenets of SFL.
1. SFL scope is wide in that it sets out to explain how humans make meaning through language and other semiotic resources, and to understand the relationship between language and society (Coffin and Donohue, 2005).
2. SFL analytical framework allows its users to make meaning of texts by the language choices the author is making. Students have to be “ideologically armed to defend against undemocratic and discriminatory practices and that their “defense will be effective only if it is informed defense” (Halliday, 1996, p. 367, emphasis in original).
3. SFL’s theoretical framework and analytical tools are not only the analysis of linguistic resources but, also it provides a framework to analyze their “social, cultural and ideological meanings.” “SFL analysis of text is not reducible to the analysis of linguistic form and structure, detached from its context of use.” (Coffin & Donohue, 2012, p. 65).
4. Language is the “essential condition of learning, the process by which experience becomes knowledge” (Halliday, 1993, p. 94).
5. Language is a principal resource for making meaning, and it serves human beings to negotiate, construct, organize, and change the nature of social experience.
6. All learning is fundamentally a linguistic process in three interrelated dimensions: learning language, learning through language, and learning about language.
7. One of the central ideas to SFL is that language is an interlocking system of options that allows its users to choose for different purposes (Martin, 2012). We make choices when using language depending on the context.
8. Language function is to make meanings (e.g., experiential, interpersonal, logical, textual meanings, (Halliday & Hasan, 1985). These meanings are influenced by the social and cultural context in which they are exchanged. Every sentence is multifunctional.
9. Mary Macken-Horarik: “All language use is context-bound, hence language always occurs as socially meaningful, coherent text, that is, as a particular genre. Not all members of society hold equal power. One means towards attaining greater power – greater degrees of freedom in action – is to have competence in the use of powerful kinds of texts in a society. Genre-theory holds out the promise of enabling teachers to understand forms of writing, and of their power, and to describe genres with sufficient detail and clarity for teachers to use as the basis for a teachable writing curriculum. All texts are entirely intermeshed with the social context in which they are produced.”
This video from a Panel Discussion: Revisiting complementary distributions of Halliday and Vygotsky to a language-based theory of learning provides a synthesis of SFL where Heidi Byrnes responds to Gordon Wells’ critique of Halliday’s ideas.
In his book Learning How to Mean, Halliday sets out provide a first ever account of language development from the sociocultural perspective. He focuses on answering the question not which sounds the child produces first and how those sounds turn into words and sentences but “what the child has learned to do my means of language” (p. 6). He rejects the notion of language acquisition because from functional view, children “make their own language” agentively.
“This [language acquisition] seems rather unfortunate term because it suggests that language is some kind of a commodity to be acquired, and although metaphor is innocent enough in itself, if it is taken too literally the consequences can be rather harmful. The use of this metaphor has led to the belief in what is known as a ‘deficit theory’ of language learning, as a means of explaining how children come to fail in school: the suggestion that certain children, perhaps because of their social background, have not acquired enough of this commodity called language, and in order to help them we must send relief supplies. The implication is that there is a gap to be filled, and from this derive various compensatory practices that may be largely irrelevant to children’s needs. Now this is a false and misleading view of language and educational failure; and while one should not make much of one item of terminology, we prefer … ‘language development'” Halliday, (1978). (p. 16)
We are not acquiring grammar structures out of the ‘mental grammar’, a static, packaged inventory of structures to be acquired through input. It is our own making of meaning through language that we pursue. This is positioned in huge contrast with the prevalent view of the American psycholinguistics. And yet, Krashen’s theory of ‘learning’ v. ‘acquisition’ has taken a firm hold of many teachers’ minds for decades.
Heidi Byrnes explicates Halliday’s agentive notion of language development by extrapolating on the SFL three metafunctions. Whenever we speak or write, we construe experience, enact interpersonal relationships, and construct discourse itself in various texts. In the phrase, “language construes experience”, there is an interpretive, a creative, and agentive notion of what language is” (Byrnes, 2013).
A few other highlights from SFL as contrasted with psycholinguistic view of language:
Language enacts interpersonal relationships. It does so simultaneously. There is no separation of pragmatics. They are inherently together. The way they are realized is in a textual environment.
When people learn languages, they build up their personalized meaning potentials. Language is a resource. Language is not a thing to be learned. It’s an available semiotic [meaning making] resource.
Language learners build up their personal potentials by gradually expanding their registerial potential. They expand their registerial repertoires. What does that mean? They can take on more and more roles. There is activism in language, not a neutral possession of grammatical structures. “They can take on growing roles in a growing range of contexts becoming semiotically more and more empowered” (Byrnes, 2013). And for multilingual learners, the potential for meaning making expands to other languages and with it “the challenge to come to use it for one’s personal good as well as for the good of others and society”.
It is through language that social empowerment is possible and the ethical responsibility goes with exactly that: if you are in an environment to enable that empowerment, then you have a responsibility to see to it that to the best of our abilities and with given constraints, we will enable our learners to give access to empowering abilities that come with the expansion of the semiotic resources that go with language. That doesn’t mean that language is the only thing, but in an education system, which we are talking about here, language will have of necessity a very strong role to play (Byrnes, 2013).
Grammar is a resource, but it’s not a decontextualized resource. We make situated choices, based on who you are, what you want to accomplish, and what relationship you want to establish with the person.
Language development is not about having less or more language. Language development is about how many spaces we can occupy. “Our view is that ESL learners’ success in school is largely related to the opportunities they have to participate in a range of authentic learning contexts and meaning-making, and the support – or scaffolding – that they are given to do so successfully in English [and other languages].” Hammond & Gibbons
Language education of minoritized students should not be about language correction, dialect eradication or teaching of a more superior language variety privileged in school. It should be about EXPANDING their meaning meaning making potential and how many spaces students can occupy.
Language is a social action. Language is not a thing to be learned. Language is a resource among many. It is a tool in the learner’s hands to take on various roles and occupy various spaces in and outside of school.
SFL-based perspective on the goal of language development is about becoming a sophisticated person who can use various resources to create their own stance and positioning.
For teachers, this means providing opportunities for language learners to become members of discourse communities, specific to their disciplines, and learn to control and manipulate a variety of registers required by the disciplines. Gibbons (2006) suggests that the question we should ask ourselves is “what are the processes that allow for ESL students to become active participants in the cultures of school, and what opportunities are there (or could be) for engagement in practice?” (p. 44). The onus is on teachers to enable our learners to gain access to empowering capabilities that come with the expansion of new semiotic resources that go with language.
Wells, G. (1994). The complementary contributions of Halliday and Vygotsky to a “Language-based theory of learning” in Dialogic inquiry: Toward a sociocultural practice and theory of education (p. 3-50). Cambridge University Press: Cambridge. Canvas.
Halliday, M.A.K. (1993). Towards a language-based theory of learning, Linguistics and Education
Halliday, M. A. K. (1976). Learning how to mean: explorations in the development of language. London: Edward Arnold
Halliday, M. A. K. (1978). Language as Social Semiotic.
The New York Times published an op-ed in 2015 analyzing the language used in the Texas History textbooks published by McGraw-Hill Education. The “Grammatical choices as moral choices” phrase in my title came from that article. The NYT piece references this original post where Coby Burren, a 15 year old student, discovers that the authors in the Texas history textbook called “slaves” as “workers.” In addition, the whole conversation about “workers” is situated in the story on immigration portraying African slaves as immigrants who came from Africa as workers. This is an obvious case of erasure of African American version of history. His mom created a brief video and posted it on Facebook to show the audience the actual evidence of the textbook.
One job authors of history books have is to produce a textbook. That entails a reconstruction of the past to tell their readers of “how things really were” and “to tell how it actually happened” (Coffin, 1998). However, during that reconstruction, “re-versioning” also happens, and new(ish) versions of history are created. The history is tinted through the lens of the author who makes grammatical choices that indeed reflect their moral choices. In other words, an author’s bias is written into the history. Also, when history textbook authors reconstruct their events, they also evaluate and re-evaluate them. What kind of language resources are available to them to reconstruct and re-evaluate the past in ways that suits their agenda? In her work on analyzing language of historic narratives, which I addressed in this blog, Coffin quotes Burke who said,
“More and more historians are coming to realize that their work does not reproduce ‘what actually happened’ so much as to represent it from a particular point of view. To communicate this awareness to readers of history, traditional forms of narrative are inadequate. Historical narrators need to find a way of making themselves visible in their narrative, not out of self indulgence but as a warning to their reader that they are not omniscient or impartial and that other interpretations besides theirs are possible. (Burke, 1991, 239)
Despite the changing attitudes to the nature of historic knowledge such as that the US history, for example, is whitewashed, not much analysis of historic writing, however, has been carried out (Coffin, 1998). However, as teachers of history, whose job is to develop critical thinkers who can formulate balanced judgments about the value of differing interpretations of historic events in relation to their historical context and to “pose questions about a topic in United States history, gather and organize a variety of primary and secondary sources related to the questions, analyze sources for credibility and bias …” (Minnesota Social Studies Standards 22.214.171.124.1), the role that language plays in the construal of those interpretations and bias is not fully exploited by teachers.
I had an opportunity to present to a class of 7th graders on how they can “see through language” and uncover author’s bias by using a very short text (Figure 1). They analyzed text without any problems and came to the conclusion that the reason authors write the way they do is because they do not like painting the history of their own country in a negative light. As a result, in this particular text they analyzed (Figure 1), slave owners get the credit for treating slaves with kindness such as providing shelter and clothing (part 1 of text below), but when it comes to negative actions such as whippings, torture, and branding – the agency is no longer made visible. We don’t want to name the bad guy. The exercise that I shared with students along with the “comprehension” questions are below.
Read the text and stop before the word “however”. Circle who is doing the action. Then tell your partner what kind of action is being done. Then read after “However”, who is doing the action? Why no people are mentioned here?
Figure 1. Text for Identifying Bias
Some slave owners reported that their masters treated them kindly. To protect their investment, some slaveholders provided adequate food and clothing for their slaves (STOP READING).However, sever treatment was very common. Whippings, brandings, and even worse torture were all part of American slavery.
Source: How Texas Teaches History, The New York Times, October 21, 2015
Students spend a great deal of time answering comprehension questions about historic events. ELLs often fill out worksheets to provide definitions of key vocabulary. Instead, we should teach them to understand perspectives and some facts are not as black and white and not that objective. Here’s a starting point for some of these questions (Figure 2): This set of questions deals with the topic of Westward Expansion, the topic my son will be studying soon in his class. I so wish his teacher engaged in these sorts of conversations with my son.
Figure 2. Suggested Language-Focused Questions for Critical Reading of Primary Sources
Suggested Language-Focused Questions for Critical Reading of Primary Sources
What are we reading? How is reading history different from reading fiction?
When was it written? Who wrote this? Why was it written? (More questions for how to source, corroborate, contextualize are in the resources for further reading).
How are settlers named? (e.g. brave explorers, determined White settlers)
How are Native Americans named? (e.g. uncivilized savages or indigenous people)
How are events described and named? (e.g. invasion, settlement or expansion)?
How is the territory they are expanding into named? (e.g. Frontier? or A Crossroads of Cultures?)
How are their actions described (e.g. journeyed or invaded)?
What facts are included? What facts are excluded?
How does the author construct perspective through those choices in Qs 3-9?
What language resources do authors use to justify White settlers’ actions?
How are Native Americans depicted in photographs?
Whose histories and experiences are included or omitted?
Who benefits from these portrayals?
What other interpretations are possible or what can be interrogated?
Is this context part of the reader’s experience, knowledge or personal history?
Teachers and students need to have a shared metalanguage to be able to understand and talk about the choices that authors make when they create their texts. Systemic Functional Linguistics provides a practical toolkit for teachers and students to analyze texts looking through the language lens. SFL asks students to always see language in context. SFL also asks students to think why out of all the choices that the author could have made, they made only those choices? de Oliveira (2010), in her work with teachers during the California History Project, produced an analysis of authors’ choices in discourse analysis of history texts from the SFL perspective by focusing on how authors used noun groups to package, condense, expand, and structure reasoning.
Before looking at individual words, it is important to talk about the context of what we are reading. The skills for contextualizing source are extremely important for all students as they develop skills to think like historians. After setting up the context, the next step is to look at sentences and then words WITHIN those sentences, not pulled out and worksheeted to death. For example, teach students to look at the whole sentence Families were often broken apart when a family member was sold to another owner. Then ask students “who did that?” question which will lead you to teach them the metalanguage for passive voice – a critical resource of many history and science textbooks. Students need to know the author made the choice to use passive voice were broken apart instead of active slave owners broke families apart to hide who committed such heinous act. In the clause “the removal of Indigenous children from their families” includes nominalization, a grammatical resource for turning an action to remove into a thing removal and discuss what function that achieved for the author. Why didn’t the author use the verb? What different meanings would have been achieved? Please don’t pull out your dusty grammar books and start creating worksheets on passive and active voice. TEACH LANGUAGE IN CONTEXT. There is no need to drill grammatical terms without any purpose. The only reason we need those terms is to have a shared metalanguage to use when looking at texts critically. After children understand what those terms are, they can create their own metalanguage as documented in several studies (Meg Gebhard, personal communication).
By taking time to look at texts critically in such a way that students will be able to “see through language” (Schleppegrell, 2017), we develop a generation of thinkers – a skill so important today in the time of “alternate facts”.
References and Resources for Further Reading:
C3 Framework for State’s Social Studies Standards https://www.socialstudies.org/sites/default/files/c3/C3-Framework-for-Social-Studies.pdf
Coffin, C. (1998). Reconstruals of the Past: Settlement or Invasion? The Role of Judgement Analysis. Paper presented for the American Association for Applied Linguistics. Retrieved from http://files.eric.ed.gov/fulltext/ED421860.pdf
deOliveria, L. (2010). Nouns in history: Packaging Information, Expanding
Explanations, and Structuring Reasoning. The History Teacher (43)2 http://www.societyforhistoryeducation.org/pdfs/de_Oliveira.pdf
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I’ve been thinking about the act of writing for a while now. What is writing? What does it mean to be a writer? What are the linguistic and cultural challenges to writing for multilingual writers? In this blog, I’ll talk about what writing means to me. I’ll share a few personal challenges of being a bicultural writer as well as what influences continue to shape my view of writing. I will also argue for a more complex view of language development for multilingual learners drawing on Systemic Functional Linguistics. I’ll provide implications for multilingual learners throughout each point.
Those who read my blog know that I am a Ukrainian American who grew up in the 70s and 80s in Ukraine which was then called the Ukrainian Soviet Socialist Republic. I went to school in the 80s. I always say that half of my education was Soviet propaganda. Despite that, I have always considered myself a creative writer and have written poems about Mayakovsky and the Communist Party in 10th grade (instead of an exposition with claim and evidence). After emigrating from Ukraine in 1995, I wrote about immigration, the cities I visited, nostalgia, my homeland, and educational inequity of ELs. Then poetry writing came to an abrupt end when I began writing my dissertation and then transitioned to blogging. While poetry was comfortable and cathartic, dissertation writing introduced a wave of challenges, both linguistic and cultural, of which I’ll write below.
Challenge 1: Comfortable Genres
Writing a dissertation was challenging for several reasons. First, it goes back to my 10th grade class when a teacher asked me to write an exposition on the Communist Party as portrayed in Mayakovsky’s poetry. I hated writing expositions. Why? Because it’s hard work! Instead, I asked to write a poem concerning the Communist party to which he agreed. It was a genre I was comfortable with. Exposition required a set of skills that I hadn’t developed.
Implications for ELLs:
For culturally and linguistically diverse learners in your classrooms, we allow them, out of the goodness of our hearts, to write in genres which they would prefer to ease their way into writing, to ease their stress and anxiety. While you may do that at the beginning of their writing development, it is important to remember that we may be doing a disservice to them. I recommend the three E’s: Expect they can do it, Explicitly teach a variety of genres, and thus, you’ll Expand their writing repertoires. If all students do is write poems about the water cycle in science, when will they engage in the disciplinary literacy of writing in ways which the science discipline values?
Disciplinary literacy is defined as reasoning, thinking, reading, writing, speaking and acting in ways that that discipline values. Science is full of its own set of genres and we don’t need to borrow from language arts if we want to meet the science standards. The Next Generation Science Standards, Practice 8: Obtaining, Evaluating and Communicating Information is expecting students to write genres that are intrinsic to science and engineering.
The reason for problematizing the “familiar and the known genres” is to expand students’ meaning potential (Halliday) or to provide functional diversification (Bayham) . If all we ask students to do is only one or two types of genres, we are not expanding students’ repertoires. This also has implications of how we view language development.
The question becomes not how long their sentences are but what they can DO with language and which writing spaces they can occupy.
Challenge 2: Writing Requires Knowledge Building
Another reason my dissertation writing proved to be challenging was because it first required me to build ideas and knowledge of the topic I was writing about. I vividly remember sitting down at my desk and starting to write and I had a very rudimentary level of knowledge on that topic. Because the topic was new to me, my writing consisted of eighty percent of reading, thinking and only then “writing”, typing your thoughts down and revising them constantly. You can say that’s it’s stating the obvious. However, we often do that with ELLs.
Being a writer, also means being a reader and a thinker, an inquirer and a seeker.
Implications for ELLs:
We often ask English language learners to write quite prematurely. Supplying them with a set of sentence frames or a graphic organizer is not sufficient if writing requires new knowledge. They need to build the field first, have an experience, develop ideas, listen to a guest speaker, read multimodal texts, develop oral language through a series of interactive activities which help students create meaning together, clarify their thinking, and build knowledge together. This phase of the cycle may take several lessons. One example of well-scaffolded writing in science can be found here. One approach that illustrates these steps well is called the Teaching and Learning Cycle.
Challenge 3: Playing Guessing Games
The other reason for the challenge with my dissertation was that it was a genre I’ve never encountered before. So, my awesome adviser Dr. Sarah Tahtinen-Pacheco suggested I study mentor texts and she explicitly modeled paragraph openers for me in the Methodology section. I read and made notes of how dissertations were written. In that process, I have noticed to construct knowledge on the topic, generalizations and abstractions were construed through various language resources. The interpersonal is achieved not through emotive appeal but through an objective stance and research citations with a dose of evaluation (e.g. significant body of research, an important issue). In other words, your personal opinions are not stated as “In my opinion….” but through “According to so and so…” ,” A vast body of research claims that… “. Those are still your opinions, however they are stated as facts using the logical appeal through research citation, etc. I’ve noticed that dissertation had a lot of redundancy in it. Things were repeated many times on purpose.
Implications for ELLs:
English learners need to learn that different genres are construed through different language choices depending on the field (what we are talking about), the audience (who we are talking to), and the mode (the channel of communication), all guided by the purpose. For a more expanded explanation, see here. One teacher commented that arguments in language arts are not the same as arguments in science. No one is interested in your opinion in science. You have to use evidence to back up your claim. But students are often left to figure out that mystery on their own because rarely do we engage our students or ourselves in the metalinguistic comparisons of genres in how the disciplines define them.
Challenge 4: Know Your Audience
When I was writing my dissertation, I had a particular audience in mind. I was writing to teachers and researchers and my language choices had to match my audience. I remember learning not to assume that people knew much about my topic and that required of me to explicitly relate the knowledge in such a way that it would help my readers learn from my dissertation.
To help students write to a particular audience, ask them to reflect on how they speak to different people. Students can contextualize language use by reflecting on how we greet different people (a principal, our friends in the lunchroom or our family members at home). We, as their teachers, can bring that language awareness to the surface and bring it into writing.
Here are some differences in the language choices my son makes. These examples illustrate different choices of words for two different audiences. My son, who is a sixth grader, allowed me to share this language with you, my readers. He said, when I text my friends or talk to them, I don’t use the language in the left column.
Frens (my son’s language used in Instagram and texting because it’s the “Twenty One Pilots thing”)
When asking my 6th grader if he carries those words into writing from texting, he gave the “Duh” look and said, “No, mom. I know that those words are for my friends. I know my teacher’s expectations.” He also knows his mom’s expectations! Look at the example below. Remember: field, tenor, and mode? The mode is the same (texting) but the audience is different (his mom) and the tenor is to appeal to his mom, so use of research in texting is intentional because of those two variables. I bet you he doesn’t cite research to his friends.
Implications for ELLs:
The question becomes, “Do English learners who represent various cultural practices and worldviews, know what’s in our heads as a teacher?” Way too often, we ask them to be mind readers. We say “Write an argument persuading your principal that we need more playground time”, and give them a sentence frame “I think… ” “In my opinion…” or a graphic organizer. But we rarely provide explicit instruction by deconstructing mentor persuasive texts to analyze the authors’ choices. How do authors “sound convincing”? What is that language? How do authors present opinions in a “neutral, authoritative” way? How do authors create logical appeal? Or the emotive appeal? How does language construe those appeals? Below are some examples of language choices for arguments with examples for those three appeals.
(Source: Westerlund, R. (2016). Focus on Writing with a Purpose. WCER, Madison, WI.)
Connectives to sequence claims (e.g., first, second, third, finally, in conclusion, to summarize, therefore) to present counter-claims (e.g., however, nevertheless, on the other hand) to show relationships of similarity or difference (similarly, moreover, nevertheless, despite this, on the other hand).
Summary statements used to pull ideas together
A variety of tenses may be used depending on the purpose (past tense to summarize past, present tenses to state the present, if-then clauses to state real or imagined effects)
Modality to present arguments or claims as possibilities rather than facts (it is likely that, it may be that)
Word/Phrase Level Dimension:
Topic-specific vocabulary (racism, segregation, racial divide, hatred) to speak with authority
Evaluative language indicating writer’s personal belief or stance (e.g., it is extremely unlikely)
Emotive language to create emotional appeal (e.g. devastating, heart-wrenching)
Language referring to research or statistics to create logical appeal (e.g., research studies have found that… Twenty percent of students reported that…)
Language to create moral appeal (e.g. it is our duty to…)
Language choices to connect with the audience (e.g., peers v. adolescents)
Modal verbs to call to action (we must act now, we should not stop…)
Instructional implications:How can I make these language features more explicit to my English learners? What activities should I consider to help my ELs choose language specific to audience?
Our students are capable of learning that when we write, we make choices and those choices, including pronoun use, active or passive voice, modals “represent relations between writers and the world we live in. Word choice and sentence structure are an expression of the way we attend to the words of others, the way we position ourselves in relation to others” (Micciche, 2004, p. 719).
An approach to making writing expectations explicit is described in the research study by Myhill and her colleagues (2016) Writing conversations: fostering metalinguistic discussion about writing. They use Carter and McCarthy’s distinction between the grammar of structure, which is concerned with language a system of grammatical structures and the grammar of choice which describes how those grammatical structures construe different meanings. The article describes an approach of using dialogic teaching to talk about language choices we make as writers, to develop metalinguistic awareness in students to help them move beyond writers as users of structures and into writers as decision makers about their choices of language.
The dialogic approach encourages teachers and students to talk about writing and
ask students to reflect on the choices they make and justify their choices
support writers to see the connection between the grammatical feature and its effect in shaping meaning
encourage language play and language contextualization.
Writing is also talking about writing and reflecting on the choices we make and how they impact our readers. Writing involves thinking about the reader. Being able to engage students in a dialogic talk about writing has implications on the teachers’ capacity to recognize and manage metalanguage about writing.
Challenge 5: The Loss of The Inner Voice
After overcoming linguistic challenges of the structure of the dissertation and the order of the sections – that’s when I discovered that each institution has its own preferred style for organizing the textual features of the dissertation genre and that they are not universal – I have come face to face with a much bigger challenge, that of cultural style of writing required by an American dissertation genre. I became acutely aware of that when the edits came back which were mainly about the types of sentences that were allowed. They had to be short sentences with maybe one or two coordinating conjunctions. I remember writing long-winded sentences with several embedded clauses drawing on what I thought was good writing in my Master’s Thesis in the Cherkassy University I had graduated from. I remember resisting that convention because to me it wasn’t just writing different types of sentences. Writing in that genre was similar to putting on clothes that you didn’t feel comfortable in. But you have to wear that suit for people to take you seriously at a job interview before you even say a word.
So, writing in L2 is best described as what Pavlenko and Lantolf (2000) said of second language learning as “participation and (re)construction of selves”. In their article, the authors argue for the inadequacy of the acquisition metaphor and propose language as participation metaphor. While the acquisition process merely focuses on us acquiring grammatical structures, the participation process stresses contextualization of language use and engagement with the certain community. It means taking on those values and practices and not merely using L2 grammar. So, when we write, we choose to participate in that culture. Pavlenko describes that stage as the loss of one’s inner voice.
If we want to understand multilingual learners’ challenges more comprehensively, we need to see beyond their grammar and sentences and into those spaces where cultural tensions happen. This may be more true for the adolescents than younger writers who are figuring out their identity and writing becomes a contested space for them. The contestation may include both the language choices and the gains and losses during the process of writing in another language.
Writing in another language also means writing in another culture.
All of the challenges listed can become opportunities. By challenging students to step out of their comfort zones and write for a variety of purposes and in a variety of contexts, we expand their range of spaces they can occupy. By teaching how to contextualize language, we give space to sociolinguistics in our classrooms because it’s already there represented by our students who speak various languages and dialects. By making language choices explicit through a systematic approach, we empower them to recognize when someone tries to manipulate them with messages on billboards and advertisements. By engaging with adolescent writers about the gains and losses of writing in another culture, we allow for critical conversations about the intersection of language, culture, and identity.
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Micciche, L. 2004. “Making a Case for Rhetorical Grammar.” College Composition and Communication55(4): 716–737
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Pavlenko, A., & Lantolf, J. P. (2000). Second language learning as participation and the (re)construction of selves. In Sociocultural Theory and Second Language Learning. Oxford: Oxford University Press. 155-177
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Cumulative Project for EDUC 731: Responsive Pedagogy for ELLs, Bethel University, Teacher: Dr. Ruslana Westerlund
8323: Water, which covers the majority of the Earth’s surface, circulates through the crust, oceans and atmosphere in what is known as the water cycle.
Where is water found on Earth and how does it get there?
Content and language learning objectives
Water Cycle Mini Unit
Science Activities and Outcomes
Experience the water cycle through two “different (though related) science experiments” (Gibbons, 2015, p. 84).
Utilize resources to understand the water cycle and define key vocabulary terms.
Compare the water cycle to the experiments.
Produce a written explanation of the water cycle.
Create a drawing of the water cycle to support the written explanation.
Share observations using informal register during the experiment
Write a cyclical science explanation involving some causality
Use comparative language when comparing the water cycle with the experiments that the students completed (similar to the …, different from …, unlike the water cycle, my experiment...)
Express understanding of water movement using verbs expand and cool,evaporate, condense, precipitate, form into, is transformed by…
Key concepts vocabulary: evaporation, transpiration, condensation, precipitation, infiltration, runoff, energy
Sequence of Activities Modeled after the Mode Continuum (Gibbons, 2015)
Activity 1: Doing an Experiment – Distillation and Solar Stills
Description and Rationale: Students will engage in one of two science experiments that model the main processes of the water cycle. Experiment one involves distilling mock ocean water through boiling. Experiment two involves the creation of a solar still.
This activity sets up a “genuine communicative situation” (Gibbons, 2015, p. 84).
Groups of students will have different, though related, experiences, which will give rise to authentic classroom discussion. In this activity, students may not have specific nominalized vocabulary such as “precipitation” or “condensation” and will instead describe the experiments orally using an informal register.
In this way, students will have a chance to develop the ideas around the key concepts prior to introducing them (Gibbons, 2015). The purpose of the experiment is to learn the scientific concepts behind the water cycle. Students can use all of their language resources to build that knowledge and the precision of their language use is not as important here. It will be more important when they get to share their ideas later in the lesson.
ELs who studied the water cycle in their previous schools or have home or community knowledge, will be encouraged to draw on their knowledge of science in this lesson.
In this activity, students will work in small groups.
Teacher Role: Arrange appropriate groups, provide materials and general instructions for the experiments, encourage small group, student-to-student discussion through discovery and inquiry. The teacher encourages the students to both do and think about science (Gibbons, 2015). The teacher’s role is very active during teacher-guided reporting. Instead of guiding students from the periphery, teachers are mediating the discussion and supporting language learning.
Student Role: Challenge each other’s ideas when participating in experiment, dialogue with peers about the experiment, thereby attempting to explain to other students what they see happening.
Activity 2: Adding New Language to Known Concepts
Rationale: At this stage, students will be learning the science terms of the known concepts in the previous activity (energy, evaporation, condensation, precipitation) related to the water cycle. This terminology will be drawn from and related to the experiments the students engaged in from the first activity.
By sequencing this activity after the experiments, students will be “given an opportunity to develop some [understanding] before they are expected to understand and use more scientific discourse and vocabulary” (Gibbons, 2015, p. 84).
For ELs, it may be useful to know that these nominalized words that pack science concepts into them such as evaporation can be unpacked through the verbs: (evaporate, condense, precipitate)
The teacher works with a mentor text similar to this one, highlight language resources that pack scientific concepts. Teacher points out that there is a lot more language in this text than just key concepts.
The Water Cycle stages are: evaporation, condensation, precipitation, and surface run off/ground water. The water cycle is also known as the hydrologic cycle. There is not a starting point to the water cylce. It is a continuous movement of water that is driven by the sun. Water from bodies of water such as oceans, river, and lakes is evaporated into the air. Condensation will form and cloud particles will grow causing precipitation to fall from the sky as surface runofff and back into the bodies of water. Evaporation is water molecules that escape the earth’s surface and enter the atmosphere. Condensation is water vapor in the air that turns into liquid droplets as the air expands and cools. Precipitation is water droplets that become heavy and fall back to the earth’s surface from clouds.
Rationale & Teacher Role: In this activity, the teacher’s role is to introduce new academic language that aligns with the student experience in activity one. This is a “[brief introduction]” necessary for the entire class (Gibbons, 2015, p. 83). All students will participate in this activity, which involves direct instruction. For the majority of the class, no individual is at an advantage as the academic concepts should be new. Both ELs and native speakers will jointly acquire the new language.
Activity 3: Teacher-Guided Reporting
Description and Rationale: In this activity, students are encouraged to use a take on an expert role which will require them to use more academic and precise language to describe the science experiments they conducted. This provides an opportunity for students to practice the new terminology introduced in activity two.
In this way, the activity is providing a bridge to written language and encourages students to use a more sophisticated register to describe the water cycle process. The reporting process is intentionally more open ended than a traditional “IRE/F” pattern in order to encourage extended responses (Gibbons, 2015, p. 88-89).
In this stage, students will also reach toward the language objective of utilizing connectives for comparing and contrasting the water cycle with the experiments that the students completed. This will be a large group activity.
“In teacher-guided reporting, the role of the teacher is to help children make sense of learning activities through talking with them, and in this process, introduce new language” (Gibbons, 2015, p. 87). The teacher needs to be an active listener and facilitator in order to scaffold and support students as they make attempts to speak scientifically.
Specifically, the teacher is not correcting students’ language but building on students’ ideas and re-voicing using precise language needed to sound like an expert. The teacher will “rebroadcast” an idea by re-voicing or ask a student to re-voice or paraphrase to give the student’s idea more exposure so everyone can hear it and think about it again MacDonald, R., Cook, H. & Miller, E. (2014). The main purpose of this is to help students make their ideas visible and clearly articulated for the other students to hear.
Students describe the experiments from activity one. In this activity students are the “[experts],” sharing their own experiences with the experiments sharing their experiences and articulating their findings while stretching their use of academic language (Gibbons, 2015, p. 89). MacDonald, R., Cook, H. & Miller, E. (2016) suggest students can restate or summarize an idea, support an idea, articulate their idea for others to hear it and learn from the student expert use of language.
Activity 3 Grouping Configuration: Groups of Students Share Their Learning with the Whole Class
Rationale & Teacher Role: In this activity, the teacher’s role is to help actively facilitate, model, and guide an academic discussion of the experiences in activity one. Student groups from activity one will, “with the help of the teacher, [share] their learning with the whole class” (Gibbons, 2015, p. 83). Because each group participated in a different experiment, each group contains information that is necessary for shaping the understanding of the entire class community. This necessitates that students report to the entire class instead of simply refining their language in small groups without sharing aloud. Additionally,
Gibbons (2015) study showed that students who listened to other student reports during a teacher guided reporting activity improved their own writing. I anticipate the same result by having small groups report to the class as a whole. Because the students are the experts in this activity, ELs are able to contribute and co-construct their knowledge alongside native English speakers with the active support of the teacher.
Activity 4: Modeling and Deconstructing the Genre
Rationale: Students will work with a science mentor text that models the cyclical explanation that students will write for their performance assessment at the conclusion of the activities. The text will be read aloud and presented as factual information (Gibbons, 2015). Language associated with the explanation will be introduced including time connectives and causal relationships necessary to structure a cyclical explanation of the water cycle. Students will examine the text for structure (order, sequencing of paragraphs, sentences, verbs in present tense and vocabulary) and discuss these items. Round out the activity with an after reading strategy (ex. Cloze) to have students practice the concept of a cyclical explanation using academic language. This will be a large group activity.
Activity 4 Grouping Configuration: Whole Class
Rationale & Teacher Role: The teacher’s role in this activity begins with modeling the process of reading and deconstructing a text. Since this is a new way to analyze a text, it is necessary for the activity to begin with the entire group working together on a passage appropriate to the content and reading skills of the class.
During this back-and-forth instruction students are “[introduced to] some meta-language,” connectives, organization, structure, and grammar that is necessary to consider how a cyclical explanation will later be constructed by the students themselves (Gibbons, 2015, p. 115).
All students need to be guided through this process, both native and non-native speakers, who would be less familiar with language awareness in science texts. Because this process will be new to all students, ELs and non-native speakers will be working collaboratively within the whole group and able to participate equally with the support of the teacher.
Student Roles: Take on the role of students who are building language awareness within the whole group to understand language choices of a cyclical explanation. This activity will support the work necessary for activity four and activity five as well as serve as an example for the performance assessment.
Activity 5: Teacher-Guided Reporting
Rationale: It is important to support students’ conceptual and linguistic development through Teacher-Guided Reporting more than once in a series of lessons. The shifting in register from the language of “here and now” to the language of scientific generalizations is a shift that needs to be scaffolded by talking which is guided by the teacher. The teacher expands students’ repertoire by recasting and revoicing what the student is contributing to reflect the more written-like language of the Mode Continuum.
Activity 6: Journal Writing
Rationale: After completing the previous activities, students are ready to use the rehearsed oral language to write open-ended journal responses about the water cycle. This journal will provide an important resource necessary for students to complete the performance assessment of writing a cyclical explanation of the water cycle and producing a graphic representation that supports the written text of their explanation.
Teacher Role: Create a prompt that encourages and does not limit student responses (use “paragraph openers”). Invite well-thought responses by planning enough time for the activity. The prompt needs to model for students the kinds of writing that will be used in the assessment tool.
Student Roles: Utilize the knowledge gained from participating in the previous activities to craft a response that utilizes new language. Students take on the role of scientists who use graphic and written representations of their knowledge about the water cycle.
Grouping Configuration: Individual
Rationale & Teacher Role: Because this activity is the last in the sequence that precedes it, students are asked to work alone under the assumption that they are ready based on the previous supports.
Without the five activities that came before, students would be unprepared to tackle this activity effectively.
Writing for this activity and the performance task that follows is, “linguistically the most demanding” and is built towards throughout the cycle (Gibbons, 2015, p. 84).
Throughout these sequenced activities students have been supported as they transitioned from the informal, oral end of the language continuum to the more sophisticated academic writing end of the continuum.
Since this activity is the last before the performance assessment, students are formatively assessed on their ability to write about the standard in order for the teacher to determine if students are individually ready for the assessment and whether or not the activities the teacher facilitated were supportive enough to prepare students for the tasks.
Success Criteria – Assessment Tool
Description: Students will write a cyclical explanation of the water cycle and include a diagram of the cycle that supports their explanation. Students will be assessed on both content and language objectives using the rubric shown below.
Accurately uses less than 50% of the academic concepts to describe the water cycle (evaporation, transpiration, condensation, precipitation, infiltration, runoff, energy)
Accurately uses more than 50%, but less than 100% of the academic concepts to describe the water cycle (evaporation, transpiration, condensation, precipitation, infiltration, runoff, energy)
Accurately uses all of the academic concepts to name the stages when describing the water cycle (evaporation, transpiration, condensation, precipitation, infiltration, runoff, energy)
Language of Cyclical Explanation
Two or more of the following statements are true about the explanation:
-Statement to identify the phenomenon is is mostly accurate.
-Explanation of the water cycle phenomenon is mostly accurate.
– Stages of the water cycle are mostly ordered correctly.
– Describes the cycle using linear language suggesting that it starts and ends.
One of the following statements are true about the explanation:
– Statement to identify the phenomenon is is mostly accurate.
– Explanation of the water cycle phenomenon is mostly accurate.
– Stages of the water cycle are mostly ordered correctly.
– Describes the cycle using linear language suggesting that it starts and ends.
Accurately identifies and explains the phenomenon of the water cycle, appropriately orders stages in the cycle using time connectives and proceeds to explain the endlessness of the cycle.
Two or more of the following statements are true about the picture:
– Accurately depicts more than 50%, but less than 100% of the key vocabulary terms.
Does not show the recursive nature of the water cycle.
– Does not include the energy source for the cycle.
One of the following statements are true about the picture:
– Accurately depicts more than 50%, but less than 100% of the key vocabulary terms.
Does not show the recursive nature of the water cycle.
– Does not include the energy source for the cycle.
Picture supports explanation by highlighting the key vocabulary and showing the recursive nature of the water cycle. Picture includes energy source for the cycle.
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MacDonald, R., Cook, H., & Miller, E. (201). Doing and talking science: A teacher’s guide to meaning-making with English learners. University of Wisconsin, Madison.